On my front cover I plan to reduce the size of my cover lines and remove them from my image on this page also. The placement of the issue number and date is also something that I will change, as the current position is not overly successful.
Also I would cut the image higher up the models body to create more of a mid shot.
On my contents page the fluidity of my house style is not present therefore it is a change that I would make. Also on this page I would include page numbers and increase the detail of what is actually in my magazine.
The size of my image on the contents is over manipulated and oversized therefore I would reduce both of these. Also I would have more consideration of what style contents I am going for so it is more professional.
What I would change on my DPS is the font size in my article and better use of the cropping tool to enhance the look.
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